User:Brays.world/Antibiotic use in livestock/ExplorerRoxy Peer Review

General info
Brays.world
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Brays.world/Antibiotic use in livestock
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antibiotic use in livestock

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great start. I am able to see the changes between your draft and the original article. You also added a reference list with links to the articles you used in your draft. I think the next step to help improve your draft is to start adding the citations to your sentences. There may also be difficult terms for some people to understand, so it might be wise to add some links for the words to other wiki articles. Ex. Nollore breed, antimicrobial resistance, etc. I understand there may not be much information about Brazil. Finding articles is hard. If you are unable to add more information, then I might suggest to edit another part, like South Korea, or add a new section entirely so that your paper is long enough. Your draft was easy to understand and I did not see any grammar issues. (except for the word draft) Keep up the good work!