User:BrdvltLB/Primary mineral/Abbyfah Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * BrdvltLB
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:BrdvltLB/Primary mineral

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes the lead has been updated to reflect the new content added.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes the lead includes an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Yes there is a brief description of the article's sections.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No the lead does not include information that is not present in the article.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * The lead is clear and concise.

Lead evaluation
Very well done

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes the content added is relevant to the topic.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes the content added is up-to-date.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * No there does not seem to be any missing content or content that does not belong.

Content evaluation
Very well done

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Yes the content added is neutral
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No there is no heavy bias.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No all viewpoints are evenly talked about.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No the content remains factual throughout.

Tone and balance evaluation
Very well done

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes all new content is backed up by a reliable secondary source of information.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Yes the sources are thorough.
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes the sources are current.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes the links work.

Sources and references evaluation
Very well done

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes the content added is well written.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * No the content added does not have any grammatical errors.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * The content is very well organized, easy to read and see the changes they've made.

Organization evaluation
Excellent

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * No images or media was added.
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * N/A

Images and media evaluation
N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * Yes the content added improved the overall quality of the article.
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * The strengths of the content is the new sub-heading "Primary Mineral Characteristics".
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * Adding some images especially in the new sub-heading "Primary Mineral Characteristics".

Overall evaluation
Very well done