User:Bre1632/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Alternatives to animal testing

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because animal testing is a big controversy and with how technology is evolving we should have alternatives for it. My first impression of the article was good. It had great sources and everything is relevant to the topic.

Evaluate the article
The lead section seems to be a bit too broad, it is hard to identify where they are going with the article. The lead has a little too much detail and they also mention a couple of things that are not in the rest of the article, so it is just useless information. They have good content in the body of the article and a lot of detail about the subject and nothing seems to go off-topic. Being that the article is on animal testing it is a little biased but they give good alternatives to animal testing which I believe balances out the article. The article uses a wide range of sources and the oldest sources I saw were from 2015. The article flows well and in each section, they lead with the harshness of animal testing and the alternatives. I feel the article needs more photos, it seems like they just copied and pasted whatever they found on a google image search. I would change the first couple of photos into something more towards animals and more towards the topic because just taking a quick look at the photos you wouldn't be able to guess the article is about animal testing. I believe the article still needs a few little edits to it but overall it was a good article with a lot of interesting information that pertained to the topic.