User:Bread6/Chemical Biology/Icocci Peer Review

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Bread6
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 * User:Bread6/Chemical Biology
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 * Chemical biology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The last two sentences of the lead have been updated to be more concise. The lead does a good job of introducing the concept of chemical biology and the common misconception that is it the same as biochemistry. There is one typo: "to the study and manipulation of biological systems." This is probably meant to be "to study and manipulate biological systems." The lead does not include a brief description about the articles main sections.

Content

Section on the history of chemical biology is a nice addition to the article. I am unsure if the original section on systems of interest is remaining in the article. While the section from the original article needs editing to be more concise, I think that it keeps the article grounded in the scientific side of chemical biology. It is also an interesting read for someone who wants to know more about what chemical biology "does." I like the part about noble prizes - I think that it sums up the article nicely.

Tone and Balance

Tone and balance is good.

Sources and References

Citation should be added for the definition of biochemistry. The rest of the information is well cited. Some citations are missing information such as titles and dates. Links that were tried opened well.

Organization

Content is well-written and well-organized. Grammatical mistake pointed out in the lead section.

Images and Media

None included. The addition of images for the systems of interest would be a nice touch (if you intend to keep this section).

Overall Impressions

I like your additions! They definitely add to the quality of the article. The history section, specifically, provides a good background for the reader on the subject of chemical biology and its origins. I think that it would be good to include the original section on systems of interest, but it definitely must be edited for simplicity. Images would be a nice touch to this section and to the overall appearance of the article.