User:Breadrhix/Miss Sophia's Diary/NanL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Breadrhix, Ksomo, SYdefination


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Breadrhix/Miss_Sophia%27s_Diary?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Miss Sophia's Diary

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article begins with a brief summary of Miss Sophia's Diary, and the entire article has no personal tone or bias words. This wiki does a good job of describing the background history, as well as the story outline and character introductions. However, the author does not label the subheadings or the heading. The pages are confusing and not  organized really well.The original article has been changed a lot, and a lot of details about the article itself have been added.