User:BrendanMagee/Korean War/Carter McCrae Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BrendanMagee


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BrendanMagee/Korean_War?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Korean War

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

what I think is done well is well is your pictures and descriptions as they paint a very good picture while reading your article, its also a very concise and clear article as well with good organization. additionally, I think the overall subtitles of your article are good with potential for lots of information, which leads me to how you might be able to improve your article. To improve your article I would try and find a few more resources on how this conflict impacted the environment or the people of North Korea from an spatial perspective. Like what exactly happened to that water after the bombings of dams and why that degradation would've left it unusable or poisoned for certain periods of time or if that impacted species who drank from that water or how did that flood impact soil that it then drained into, or if that is even a potential problem at all.