User:BrendenB2002/Ischadium/Chlolow22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BrendenB2002


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BrendenB2002/Ischadium?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ischadium

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

- Lead is concise and clear

- Diverse sources with up to date neutral content

- You can make the bold headings actual headings by highlighting them and hitting "heading" in the paragraph tab.

- Maybe say why it is a "good prey item"-- know anything about the food chain/web of its habitat?

- These are great facts! Maybe include information regarding general body description, reproduction, ecology if that information is available

- There are places in the "Predation" and in the middle of "Strategies to Avoid Predation" where information needs to be cited

- Link the word "ash" because people might not know that term

- At the end of "Predation" maybe include why these elements matter, if that information is known

- Nice job explaining "Strategies to Avoid Predation"

- You should put "Ischadium recurvum" as the title of this article

- There are a few grammar mistakes in the first and last paragraphs

- Photos are applicable and interesting! As well as copyright approved

- Nice job!!