User:Brenna.roy/Sagrinae/Megfennelly Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brenna.roy


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brenna.roy/Sagrinae?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sagrinae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Apologies about just writing your review now, I wanted to wait until you had a good amount in your sandbox so I could give you a good review!

Lead:

The lead of the article is only one sentence so far, which is neutral and straight to the point but could use a lot of beefing up. I would add a little bit more about the beetle itself and a few introductory sentences to what you will be talking about within the article itself. The current sentence is great as an introductory sentence though!

Content:

The description section has a spelling error on the third "metafemora". I think this information added is very informative, however it uses a lot of sophisticated wording such as "prognathous" and "sulcus", which can be confusing for readers that don't know much about beetles. It might be beneficial to explain what some of these terms mean, or to write about them using simpler terminology.

The distribution and reproduction sections are a little bare as well, but the information within them is concise and neutral. Maybe you could go a little more in depth about these topics, or combine them if there isn't much to be said about either?

Tone and Balance:

All the new content that has been added is neutral, professional and concise. Good Job! I would say that the distribution, reproduction, and lead sections are slightly underdeveloped, but the description section has a good amount of new information in it.

Sources and References:

The three references I see in your sandbox draft are by three different authors, and the link I clicked on was legit. The newest source was from 2021, so the information seems to be up to date and reliable.

Images:

There's only one image of the beetle in the Sagrinae article, so I would definitely say that adding more images could be something good to work on. Maybe add images of the different colors that they come in, or of them making a cocoon?