User:BrennonBarney/Giuseppe Bertani/DyeMeg Peer Review

General info
BrennonBarney, Malaypayne, BrodyManore, Ethanstryker
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:BrennonBarney/Giuseppe Bertani
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Everything included in the article draft so far is relevant and neutral. I would recommend adding specific headers to the information, such as background, achievements, associations, etc. I think this would make the article more cohesive and you can focus on specific points of Giuseppe Bertani in a more organized manner.

I would also recommend including a little bit more information about LB medium, since this is what Bertani is best known for. For example, if the source is available, include why he created LB medium, or how he created it.