User:Brestaino/Public Policy/Hanfino Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brestaino


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great article!

Lead -

there is not a lead here, however it goes straight to the point and I do not think it is necessary to add a lead with this specific topic as the original article already has a substantial amount of information

Content -

The content added is relevant to the overall wikipedia page and brings new ideas, such as artificial intelligence

Tone -

I believe the contribution was neutral and direct, it truly encoposses the objective of Public Policy with a new perspective and outlook that was not initialy there.

Sources -

The sources utilized are sufficient in delivering the authors message

Organization - the entire piece flows very well

Images -

Does not apply to this page