User:Bri3866/Dog Coat/Savannah35 Peer Review

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Bri3866
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 * User:Adelinegrace219/Island glass lizard

Evaluate the drafted changes
Article Body's:


 * I think you should add other types of coat types. With a small briefly mention of them and what the look like. You can also add picture of the different types of coat.
 * There a total of five categorized of coat types which are Double coat, Silky coat, Smooth coat, Wire coat and Wool coat.
 * When You mention "Dogs that are double-coated (two layers of hair) would be safer because it prevents injuries and their coats are smooth" So if the double coated have two layers of hair what are they and what the different between the two?


 * I recommend you to explain more on the different of the outercoats and undercoat.
 * The under coat is a lighter color than the outer coat.
 * When you said "It looks like their outercoat is growing a lot but it's the undercoat. It takes longer for the outercoat to grow than the undercoat." This sentences should off to me I would recommend to say Although you might think the outercoat appears to grow more but in reality the outer coast grows more than the outercoat. In which the outercoats takes longer to grow.
 * When you said "Dogs that are double-coated (two layers of hair) would be safer because it prevents injuries and their coats are smooth." I don't understand how the coats are smooth helps dogs with double coated would be safer you might want to maybe explain more on that? A better way to say this is to say Dogs with double coats would be safer due to the fact that the the double coasts help to prevent injuries.
 * I think you should add function of coat hair.
 * Functions of coat hair: Protection from injury, Insulation in cold weather, Colour/identification of a breed and sensory


 * For white hair dogs: When you mention white coat have a lot of issues what are some of the issues regarding the skin? Is there a reason why they itch a lot and lick their paws a lot?
 * For grey hair dogs: How are these dogs bodies built differently?
 * Is there any issues that black hair dogs have??
 * For the grooming part you can add tools they use or if they have a special way to cut the dogs hair you can include that. This is just some ideas if you want to add these into the grooming.
 * Cost Growth Cycle: The first sentence has a period after through before naming the three phases. If you are going to have one phase capitalized I would do that to the other two. If you want them lowercase make sure all of them are lowercase.
 * Some things to add under Coast growth Cycle: When they get rid of the winter coat it allows them to keep cool. While in the winter the thicker coat keeps them warm. The cost growth is controlled by the seasons, environment, Nutrition and hormones.

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Content: Content added was relevant to the topic, up to date. There are some things I thought that they can add in to the article.

Tone and Balance: The tone is neutral

Sources and References: The sources and references are all up to date and all of them worked.

Organization: It is very organized which was broken down into section that reflect the major points of the topic. There are some spots that need to be little clear. It is easy to read. There are some grammatical errors.

Overall Impression: Great work there are just minor things that should be changed but other than that great work.