User:BrianaPhil/Cora Johnstone Best/PDLemoo Peer Review

General info
BrianaPhil
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:BrianaPhil/Cora Johnstone Best/Bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cora Johnstone Best and Audrey Forfar Shippam

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's great that your expanding more on Shippam! The article as it currently reads seems to just mention Shippam and be mostly focused on Best.

One slight change i would suggest is to have the article mention not much is known about her childhood before mentioning her marriage. The article may flow a little better chronilogically.