User:BriannaJohnston/Mental Health Inequality/Go23bears Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BriannaJohnston


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BriannaJohnston/Mental_Health_Inequality?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Mental health inequality
 * Mental health inequality

Evaluate the drafted changes
All of your additions are very important and relevant, especially the section on insurance coverage as this can be a barrier to many needing mental health services. I think insurance coverage could be a whole new section in mental health inequality and your information could be a sub-section on coverage in the U.S. Just an idea.

I think if you add examples to where institutional racisms occurs in healthcare but may not be visible would really strengthen the information your sharing.

The one sentence of history on AWB seems a little out of place as you are discussing alternative medicine.