User:Briannabryant2/Bluestocking (magazine)/AJReeve22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Briannabryant2)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * "Their lesbian relationships were particularly harped on due to the ideological development in the 1910s that same-sex relationships, specifically between women, were revolting and a result of mental illness ."


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bluestocking_%28magazine%29

Evaluate the drafted changes
I found your word usage to be very adequate. It fit the article and seemed very neutral. The only word I would change would be "harped." This is most likely just personal preference, but I can't help but feel that it stands out in a weird way. I also like the position you chose to add the statement, it seemed placed well chronologically with the rest of the article.