User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/BintaB Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Briannastjean, MeaganLukavec, Martiniaudrey, Gabspedraza, Lizzo2210, RamirezAlejandro305


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Briannastjean/Theory_of_Hyper%28in%29visibility?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think this is a very well done article, lots of information provided in order to give the audience a good understanding of the content presented! Although the lead paragraph is missing for now, make sure to create one that is centered around the main points of the topic chosen. One of the sources are structured incorrectly and should align with the other references.