User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/ChristenCosat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
A lead is currently not edited in the article but I think there could be better organization to the contents of the article. The ideas bounce from topics to different examples that aren't all relevant to each other. -Christen Cosat