User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/Easiersnow145 Peer Review

For your article body, I like how you have your information broken up into paragraphs, I think this is very appealing to the eyes when reading an article. I notice that you have a heading called “Examples of Hyper(in) visibility through specific communities:”, if this is a header, I would suggest bolding the text and possibly increasing the text size by one or two points. Just so it stands out more. Another thing is you have your theory typed as “Hyper(in)visibility” with the parentheses. I know that this comes up as being spelled wrong without the parentheses, so I would suggested keeping it like that for each time you type it. So perhaps fixes the second paragraph where you didn’t add the parentheses.