User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/Haydenscott1224 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User:Briannastjean


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility
 * User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility

Evaluate the drafted changes
this article provides examples and includes their references for the information provided. This article has no lead. there is also no proper definition of the theory. The author needs to include a lead and a background and a definition of the theory.