User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/Kurry72 Peer Review

This Article body about examples of Hyper(in)visibility through specific communities shows good information that covers the topic has its references that are up to date and fills a full body paragraph of the article well. The tone and balance could be a little better by using some good general statistics on the topic so that we can see for example that if Muslim woman are overlooked in media what that rate is between other woman of different religions or other genders of Muslim religion are covered. Things similar to that to show that disparity with a statistical backing to show the magnitude of what there facing in the article.

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