User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/Username1048482 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Briannastjean, MeaganLukavec, Martiniaudrey, Gabspedraza, Lizzo2210, RamirezAlejandro305


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Briannastjean/Theory_of_Hyper%28in%29visibility?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article is looking great so far! Your examples of hyper-visibility and hyper-invisibility are very concise and descriptive. Your discussion of this theory is strong as you view it through various lens, such as the media. You also write your body with a neutral tone and provide multiple viewpoints. One suggestion I have is providing an intro sentence for your body that will allow you to transition from your lead to your article. Great job with this article!