User:Briannastjean/Theory of Hyper(in)visibility/Woodyedwards Peer Review

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Briannastjean


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Peer Review for Brianna St. Jean

Hyper Invisibility

The study conducted by Isis H. Settles.

Brianna began her article by defining Hyper Invisibility and giving us a relative example. She used the content of The Muslim women to show how they are invisible even when they are being addressed.

Her tone was neutral and balanced citing only the facts from the original article and correlating those facts from her own research. Brianna listed the sources from which she obtained information on the Muslim women and it appears she actually fact-checked Settles's study. She listed several references from a diverse group of authors which also helped support Settles findings and added some of her own.

She was thorough in her article but not overly wordy. She listed the cites and the facts and did not give her own opinion. She remained neutral throughout the article.

I did click on some of the links, some worked while a couple did not. She did not include images which probably could have enhanced her article but overall she did a good job of presenting the information in an appealing and easily readable way.