User:BridgetMn/Female genital mutilation in India/Wikiassign0923 Peer Review

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BridgetMn
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Since theres no contributions to review yet, here are some ideas for changing the article: Female genital mutilation in India.

First the article is not necessarily neutral, it would help to have a accurate descriptions of the religious or spiritual beliefs behind this tradition and equally it would help mentioning similar practices to young Indian males. Additionally the article could use a visual, a map of occurrences by state in India or perhaps an international map of genital mutilation to better contextualize the practice with international rates and practices. You commented on this but a for comprehensive introduction/summery is needed. Additionally sources not from news outlets could be used in terms of documented types of procedures. Medical sources should also come from broader multi-authored sources or anthologies if at all possible (i,e reference 7) Wikiassign0923.