User:Bridget Fountain/Tubastraea tagusensis/Hannahcooksey4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bridget_Fountain


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Bridget Fountain/Tubastraea tagusensis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Does not exist.

Evaluate the drafted change
Very clear and easy to read information. Provides all the information needed in an easy to understand fashion. The paragraphs are separated and titled correctly that makes it easier to guide through the article. I would like to see more of a description of the species just to attempt to give the reader a better visualization or even to add images to make it that much clearer of the species you are trying to portray since there are no other articles that contribute to this said species. I would also try to add a species box to organize the taxonomy to make the page look more presentable; however, the characterizations of the Tubastraea tagusensis is in the article so it is simply a creativity suggestion. Finally, I would add a few more sentences to the final subheadings at the end of the article. Try to explain what the "wrapping method" is to make the reader know what you are referring too.

I enjoyed this article and learning about the Tubastraea tagusensis!