User:Bridget Fountain/Tubastraea tagusensis/Ltdewitt Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Bridget Fountain


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 * User:Bridget Fountain/Tubastraea tagusensis


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This looks like a good outline so far. If you're going to talk about where the species is invasive, make sure you also include what areas it is native to. You could also include what species it competes with when it is introduced to new locations. Definitely go into more detail about the "wrapping method" and what the (negative or positive) effects (if any) are to this method. Just remember to have a neutral standpoint when writing about this.

When you continue working and make this draft more "official" looking, I would use broader headings such as "Ecology" or "Distribution" and then add the sub-headers that you have now underneath those. Your sources all look really reliable (reviewed scientific journal articles). Just make sure you add 3 more to get to the total of 12. You're going into a lot of detail for this species and it seems like it is going to be a really interesting wiki article. I'm excited to read it at the end of the semester. Good work!