User:Brierbach/The Lost Lennon Tapes/Ndurliat Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brierbach


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Brierbach/The Lost Lennon Tapes


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * The Lost Lennon Tapes

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, I like the changes you have done to the article so far. I like how you provided extra detail about his wife and his songwriting.

What you have written so far is easy to read and seems to have a neutral tone. The sources seem to be relevant to the topic.

For changes I think adding a picture of John Lennon would be very useful. I think any Wikipedia page about a person should have a picture of their face.

Additionally, I would suggest some more sub headers with topics that you can go in depth about, the headers can help you organize your page and fill it out easier. Maybe like for the Beatles anthology part? Or like the love life part?

Another change I would recommend is to go more in-depth as to why these tapes are significant, and why people can be interested. You go a little bit to it in the third chunk, but I think the importance of the tapes should be emphasized further maybe by highlighting major details. I would be careful not to change the neutral tone though.

Good work so far though :)

Noah