User:BrigRein/sandbox/bibliography

Peer Review
Hi BrigRein, my suggestions are that:

1. Maybe you could extend your overview/intro section a little (i.e. very brief summary on the distribution, pathogenicity, and morphology of your fungus etc.), so the reader could have a general sense of M. gallinae.

2. How about adding information on synonymy in your history section? (i.e. Epidermophyton gallinae, Lophophyton gallinae, Epidermophyton gallinae etc.).

3. I like the way how you separate animal and human hosts into two paragraphs, very organized! In addition, maybe it would be helpful if you could include a "treatment" section under "Pathogeniciy"?

Overall nice job! :)

Ciel0525 (talk) 20:43, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedbacks, they are very helpful! I'm revising my article now. Good luck on your assignment!Ciel0525 (talk) 21:38, 1 November 2013 (UTC)

Hi there, hope you don't mind me giving you feedback on your article. Your article looks like it's coming along well. I would maybe take away the distribution subheading and add that information in your introduction. If you can also find more ecological information such as it's preferred food source or needed vitamins or conditions it needs, I think that would also enhance your article. Good job so far! Mengf123 (talk)23:55, 31 October 2013 (UTC)

Hi! For the feedback, I just wanted to tell you to develop each section of subheadings. But your page looking good so far! Just keep up the good work! I have not done much either yet.. Let's make an awesome page!! Also, I think some visual aids would make the page more attractive! :) choemin99 (talk)

For the (late) peer review, maybe you can explain how genomically identical species is similar to your fungus i.e. other than similar genome, what other things are comparable?? I suggest that you add briefly about the ecology of the fungus and very brief history how it was found in the first place? Also for the pathogenecity section, I think you can add more about the mode of infection? Good luck! :) Kchung325 (talk) 20:01, 4 November 2013 (UTC)