User:Briirb/Nammu/Iris Paige Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Briirb


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Briirb/Nammu - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nammu - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
The bibliography has good resources that are in alphabetical order. The sandbox for this article and user "does not exist." The article itself doesn't have much information, nor resources. So, it could use both of those. The article also isn't broken into separate sections, such as "Description" and "Origin." By redistributing the information into different sections, it could make the page quicker to navigate and the topic easier to understand.