User:Brisaintedits/Fish slaughter/Efl4ora Peer Review

General info
Brisaintedits
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Brisaintedits/Fish slaughter
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fish slaughter

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think you are making strong additions and working towards an improvement to this page. Some suggestions I have would be to include your bibliography sources in the text itself (source your material). I am wondering if you plan on adding more at this point?