User:Brissaluna/Negative selection (natural selection)/DataAndSpot Peer Review

General info
Brissaluna
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brissaluna/Negative_selection_%28natural_selection%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Negative selection (natural selection)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I appreciate the guiding summary that you have for yourself so far! It appears that most of this information could go into your Lead. It's nice that the stub appears to provide a good base to improve upon. I'm looking forward to what your future edits look like. DataAndSpot (talk) 19:12, 24 February 2024 (UTC)