User:BrittanyAngelMa/Yuri Yokomizo/Luiza Coulaud Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * BrittanyAngelMa
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Yuri Yokomizo


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Evaluate the drafted changes
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you made really good progress! i feel intimidated by looking at it because i'm a little behind with my article.

lead -- god and straightforward. i wonder if you could add a little bit more information, if you find any, on her personal life? in addition to what you already said about her works.

early career -- this is looking good! maybe in addition to talking about her main projects, maybe setup a timeline with external links referring to those projects within wikipedia, if the re any already published on wikipedia.

another idea is also add some of her recent work and recent life, right now its focusing a lot on her upcoming.

good work so far!