User:BrittanyU/Pomacea bridgesii/Vferreiraa12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BrittanyU


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BrittanyU/Pomacea_bridgesii?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pomacea bridgesii

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that you have really good information on the page, and many sentences included. I think it was nice that you had added the link to certain words that you used in the sentences. I will say that it was a little confusing reading because of the format that you had. By that I mean some of the words that you had bolded, did not make sense to why they were. If you were citing something you could rewrite the sentence with information you learned and then have a small citation link at the end of that sentence. When looking over your references, I think it was done well, but you did not use the link button on the draft which helps you in forming the wiki citation. Also there was not a photo added to the draft, so I think for next time you can add a photo to add more information to the already published article. Overall, good job!