User:Brittanyhchan/Christian feminism/Leon2008cheng Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Brittany Chan
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brittanyhchan/Christian_feminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Christian feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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Well done!! The paragraph you referred to from the "Christian feminism" Wikipedia page offers a concise but impactful overview of the roles women have played in Christian history and texts, emphasizing their significance and actions as followers of God. But, personally, I think providing more background on the cultural and historical context in which these women lived would be good for your claims. This could offer readers a deeper understanding of the challenges and societal norms these women were confronting. Also, I recommend you incorporate more examples of influential women from different periods of Christian history to demonstrate the continuity and evolution of women's roles in the religion.