User:Brittanyhchan/Christian feminism/Trisandejarnatt Peer Review

General info
Brittanyhchan
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brittanyhchan/Christian_feminism?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Christian feminism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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I think your have added some really good context that help me understand the original text much better.I would break up your section a little more so that is easier to read and this can help you go more in depth about each point you are trying to make.

I would just make it more broken down to make it easier to follow your point and easier to look at and understand your many point.

Overall really good job!