User:Brk2468/Endometriosis and infertility/Henrock-Rony Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Amcrosetti


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

It may be better to define endometriosis and infertility separately. The way the lead currently reads, it almost seems like every person experiencing endometriosis will always experience infertility.

Content:

The information appears to be highly relevant and up to date! Excellent differentiation of the different diagnostic classifications.

Sources:

Up to date and applicable sources are cited.

Organization:

Article is logically organized, coherent and very easy to follow.

Tone:

Neutral and appropriate.

Overall impression:

I think that Amcrosetti greatly improved the utility and clarity of this page significantly. It's very helpful to have a better understanding of the diagnostic classifications to better understand the scope and gradations of disease states.