User:Broeygisvon1446/Nikki S. Lee/Toyeyeball Peer Review

LEAD

Very good. I would not suggest any changes. It is concise and gives you enough background information to understand the key points of her career and life. Also, I like the translations.

CONTENT

I think the word "education" and "life" in your header, "Early Life and Education" needs to be capitalized.

"she wanted to "make something on her own," which propelled her to enter a new career as a photographer." - I think you can rephrase this without needing to add a quote from the article

I honestly don't have much critique here. You provide an unbiased summary of her works and career. It is all relevant and helpful. It is neutral and your sources all seem reliable. Good job!

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