User:Brooke LSB/Lifestyle photography/Claireaustin23 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brooke LSB


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Brooke LSB/Lifestyle photography


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Street photography

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that what you have drafted in your sandbox is good information, though when looking at the existing article I do wonder if it is redundant. Since there are already sections in the article where it mentions specific artists who use this art form, perhaps you could expand on them further using the artists you mentioned in your sandbox draft? Your source looks good, but I think you could find more. I think that it might be more helpful if you addressed a specific section of the article rather than the overview. Hope this helps :)