User:Brookeot98/sandbox/Dorothy Hansine Andersen

Possible topics
Amalie Dietrich

1. provide information on her education and personal life

2. provide more information on her research

Donna Strickland

1. provide information on her education and personal life

2. provide more information on her research

Dorothy Hansine Andersen

1. provide more information on her past life

2. provide more information how her research career

3. add information about her time in WW2

4. add information about Andersen's disease

evaluate wikipedia
Article - Irène Joliot-Curie

1. The information in the article is all on topic.

2. The information seems to be up to date, however, some of the retrieval dates in the citation go back to 2008.

3. All of the information provided it cited in the article.

4. The links provided all seem to work.

5. The tone of the article is neutral.

6. This article is currently in 5 wikiprojects and is C-rated.

7. The conversations are asking for more information to be provided on certain topics discussed in the article.

peer reviews
I added the following peer reviews to the correct pages. I have not received a peer review on my page yet.

Diane Barber 1. The tone was neutral which is good for a Wikipedia page.

2. The research section was split into the scientist's three main focuses which made it easier to read.

3. Information about the personal life of the scientist was provided.

4. I liked seeing the "selected publication" portion, however, I think the page would have a better flow if this was located after the "awards and memberships" section.

5. I liked that there was an awards and memberships section this was something I did not think to add to my report.

Ross Granville Harrison Peer Review

1. I liked that the student provided a section that acknowledged the scientist's other interests.

2. Information about the personal life of the scientist was provided.

3. The tone was neutral.

4. The student could provide more information when he stated: "studied in many places around the world."

5. The introduction is a little vague because of the wording in places such as: "studied in many places around the world" and "many learned societies and received several awards".