User:Brooklynbiology/Jamaica Bay/KMorales34 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

BrooklynBiology


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brooklynbiology/Jamaica_Bay?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Jamaica Bay

Evaluate the drafted changes
The 'Ecology' section in your sandbox seems to be taken directly from the original article verbatim. Be careful with this, as our training stated, even our sandboxes can be flagged for plagiarism. I notice that your second portion, Science and Resilience Institute at Jamaica Bay is also verbatim from the article.

I am not sure if you have already published these portions of your wiki article and that's why its already in the current article. If not be careful of what youre putting in the sandbox for edits.

If this IS your work, I notice you are working alone and that can be very difficult.

I think the writing is clear, informative and does stick to the main topic of the article. Your sources are very good.

I see that there is already a solid Lead for the original article so I do not think that you need to add anything to that.

The content that you have added is relatively up to date. If what's written here is your own work, I think that it was a great addition to the article. Your sources are cited well, and the article is very easy to follow, concise and grammar looks great. Keep up the good work !!