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Article Evaluation Space Race is the article I will be evaluating. To me, there is not enough information as the why it started. And I think that is very important. It only states what the race was and the specifics of the race but nothing really to do as to how it started or come about over the cold war. The article is very neutral and all of the links work so that is no issue. Also reading onto it, it looks like there needs to be more information as to what led out of the race and how it is still seen today.

Potential Topics German Inflation https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hyperinflation_in_the_Weimar_Republic this article is not very clear at all and is a little confusing British Navy during WW1 https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Royal_Navy there is not a lot of info about WW! so i could contribute that here

I have chose the German Inflation. I will address the title, I will address the causes and some more background because this article is very short and does not have much detail at all to what the German inflation was.

Bibliography http://www.pbs.org/wgbh/commandingheights/shared/minitext/ess_germanhyperinflation.html - this tells how much German money was worth in compression to other countries. it also says that there was an assignation of a minister that led to the slow moving way of doing anything for the inflation. https://mises.org/library/hyperinflation-germany-1914-1923 - gives more info on the background of the inflation

Drafting (edited to what i will eventually make a final edit) CHANGES I MADE FOR THE GERMAN INFLATION 1.	Changed the title because the previous title had nothing to do with the German inflation of the world war even though the whole page was about the German inflation. 2.	Added more info on the beginning of the inflation and why it started. There was hefty information as to what happened during the inflation and what was done to try and combat it, but there was very little to why it actually happened, and I thought that was important as well. This is what I contributed. a.	This was by far the greatest and most devastating inflation that Germany has ever faced in previous historical times. The inflation reached its peaking limits in the years following 1919 up until appropriately 1923. But before its peak, it had to rise, and that rise can be seen in 1914, with the out break of the first World War. There is one simple reason as to why that happened, and that is all due to the government wanting to make sure that they were covered in the upcoming war costs. The government of Germany heavily raised the money being made, due to thinking that it would cover all the upcoming war costs, but eventually led to the hyperinflation that devastated the country later on in this particular era of time. The National Library of Israel, Edmond J. Safra