User:Brooksilvers/Dress code/MaxenGL Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brooksilvers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Dress code


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dress code

Evaluate the drafted changes
As nothing has yet to be added to the sandbox yet, I'll be reviweing the original article. The lead gives a great overview of what is to be found in the article itself, and the history section gives a good background, though not all groups of people are being equally represented which could imply the an editor belongs to one group and therefore knows more about it, which is something that of course should not be seen in a wikipedia article. This can be sensed in some more places throughout the article, for instance in the beginning where "western dress code" is being used as an example. While the article does have a good selection of what seems to be reliable and up to date sources, citations don't really come as often as they would need to, which is probably the area where there is the most room for improvement in this article.