User:Browneye123/Labor Zionism/Bane117 Peer Review

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 * Editing User:Browneye123/Labor Zionism - Wikipedia
 * Labor Zionism - Wikipedia
 * Labor Zionism - Wikipedia

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I enjoyed reading your draft of this article. However, I do believe you are missing some background information and context of this form of Zionism. Also, I recommend adding more influential figures of this ideology such as; Moses Hess and what he proposed, and A.D Gordan and their influence of Labor Zionism.