User:Brownjoshuaa/Callianira (ctenophore)/Mtav7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brownjoshuaa


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Brownjoshuaa/Callianira_%28ctenophore%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Callianira (ctenophore)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This appears to be more of an annotated bibliography than an article. The notes on the sources, however, are detailed and informational. There is a lot of good ideas here and once the article is written, could be presented in a great way.

Consider including different sections to organize your information, similar to how you split by source. I think this will help the article appear more professional and will help the reader understand your main points. There is also a lot of opportunities for links within your article, such as a link to Mertensia ovum, which could connect your articles and increase the chance of your page being viewed.

This article is not complete, but I think there is a lot of potential from the information presented. Your ideas are there, you just need to create the story to link them together!