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Article Evaluation: Epithelioid Cell (assigned article)
The article is stub-class with very little content. There is a lack of relevant citations and the writing style needs to be modified as it does not fit within recommendations. It appears that there is no dialogue about the article occurring on the talk page. Bibliography tbd later

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Edited article including addition of 1 source and changing the tone of multiple sentences to conform to standards.

Article Evaluation: Parabiosis
All the topics covered in the article seemed relevant, but the experimentation section seemed longer compared to the other sections. Also, the experimentation section didn't need to go so in-depth on the examples, as it was somewhat distracting to the overall topic. The section about the controversy surrounding parabiotic experiments needs to be sourced better, as the claims appear to be unsourced (e.g."some scientists"). Citations work and seem relevant but could be more frequent especially in the experimentation section. The article is rated as stub-class and low-importance in several scientific WikiProjects. There does not seem to be any discussion present.