User:Bruisingspace01/Poppaea Sabina/Moonhater99 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Bruisingspace01
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Bruisingspace01/Poppaea Sabina

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * The lead has not been updated
 * The lead is fairly concise as is
 * The lead does reference most of the major sections
 * Most of the lead is relevant except maybe the last sentence
 * The lead is a good length already I think

Lead evaluation
It looks like you didn't really touch the lead which is fine, this article is a lot more substantial than some of the other ones I saw so you have more to focus on. Like I said I think the last sentence of the lead about her villa in Pompeii could be taken out or maybe moved to another section but I think leaving it in is okay too.

Content
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 * The content you added does provide more context about Poppaea's life and death
 * It all seems up to date to me
 * I think women in ancient Rome were an underrepresented group so it is always good to learn more about them but Poppaea was still an emperor's wife so she is not too underrepresented

Content evaluation

It looks like You added a sentence or two about Poppaea's relationship with Jewish people at the time and another sentence that provides more information on how her funeral went down and I did not have a problem with the addition of those things. I especially think what you added about the funeral is better than what was already there.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * I would say what you added was fairly neutral
 * No biased claims I could find, you mostly just brought up some facts
 * I think adding in a bit about Jewish relations is good because they can be underrepresented sometimes
 * No strong persuasion here

Tone and balance evaluation
I think what you have added is balanced and fair, you bring in the opinion of a Jewish historian which could be seen as getting biased but I don't think it is because you are just highlighting a relevant perspective not claiming it or absolute fact nor are you using it to make an unrelated argument, so I don't think you had problems with tone and balance

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Your sources do seem fairly credible
 * There is probably not a ton of literature about Poppaea, she most likely shows up here and there in a lot of stuff about Nero, but I get that you may not want to sift through countless depictions of Nero's debauchery just for one new sentence about Poppaea so i commend you for the sources you found
 * Seems current enough
 * Jewish people have been historically marginalized a few different times so yes it does cover that
 * Links looks good to me

Sources and references evaluation
Only a few sources which I totally understand, I am in the same boat but I think the ones you got are good. The word "alleged" in one of your sources does make me question it a bi but after seeing it was from JSTOR I was not worried

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * It was well-organized to begin with
 * I did not find any spelling errors

Organization evaluation
I don't see much that you did to change the way this article was organized but I don't think it needed much improvement so all you had to do was not mess it up which you did not, so good job

Images and Media
Guiding questions: No added images

Overall impressions
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 * I do think you have improved the article from before with the information you added
 * If you could find another source or maybe add context in a few other areas it would make this even better.

Overall evaluation
Adding an image would be a great way to improve this even more, but maybe you have already looked and did not find a good one. There are a ton of films listed at the bottom of the article and no images there so that could be a good thing to do, finding a movie poster or an on-screen depiction of Poppaea would be awesome.

Also I am sorry that this took me so long to do, I did not mean to keep you waiting like that