User:BryanC194/Sustainable consumption/Jakemeisen81 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * BryanC194
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:BryanC194/Sustainable consumption

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * yes it has.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * yes, it is an enticing sentence leading you into the meat of the article (or if you're vegetarian, the Tofu).
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * yes it does
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * yes it talks about the history which is absent from the article.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * it is pretty well done.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * yes, any time you interpret the history of something, it is very relevant.
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * yes.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * I think that all the content I saw has a good reason for being there.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * no.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * yes, there is no noticeable bias. it is hard when dealing with interpretations to remain unbiased but this editor did a great job.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * no.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * no.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * not really, it just shows the interpretation of history.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * yes there are multiple reliable sources.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * yes they do.
 * Are the sources current?
 * yes.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * they appear to be, yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * yes, they are active.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * yes, it is very easy to read.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * there are few minor grammatical errors that can be fixed with a thorough proof read.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * yes, there are good sections that are easy to follow.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * no
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * n/a
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * n/a
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * n/a

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * yes
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * so exhaustive they are about to pass out.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * no.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * no

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * very much so yes
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * the organization of this addition is a major strength for me.
 * How can the content added be improved?
 * slight grammatical improvements. other than that, nothing.
 * Does your peer have 5-7 reliable sources?
 * yes
 * Is at least one of them a source from class reading or the "suggested sources" list?
 * I don't think so.
 * Does the topic link in some way to our course material?
 * yes
 * Does your peer add historical context to their article?
 * yes, it interprets history.
 * Based on what you know from course content, what do you think Wikipedia users should know about this topic? In other words, what would you recommend adding and/or considering further?
 * I would recommend focusing less on picking out bias in the original article and focus more on the addition.