User:BryceKubasta/Wyoming Governor's Mansion/Fatfrog69 Peer Review

General info
BryceKubasta
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Wyoming Governor's Mansion
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Wyoming Governor's Mansion

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * The lead was not updated with the changes made, and the lead lacks details of what the article is about. It only includes information on where the Wyoming Governors mansion is and when you can visit the house.
 * The added content is very good and relevant to the subject and seems to be up to date. There is lots of information concerning the architectural style of the building and what the features are.
 * The tone of the added content is neutral for the most part. The ending thoughts about the mansion being a symbol of Wyoming architecture could be seen as biased.
 * I don't think the content added was to try and convince readers in one way or another; it was added to inform readers of the importance of this building in Wyoming architecture.
 * The content added is organized almost as a "walkthrough" of the building starting with outside features, moving to inside features.
 * There are grammatical errors throughout the added content.
 * The added content is clear and gets the point across
 * No images or media were added
 * The article is more complete with the added changes. There was virtually no information about the Wyoming Governor's Mansion before the recent content was added. It focuses on the architecture of the house and the history of that house's design.
 * The added content should be checked thoroughly for grammar errors.