User:BrycenWheeler/Dasymutilla occidentalis/Tay.Invert Peer Review

General info
Kelseywigger
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:BrycenWheeler/Dasymutilla_occidentalis?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Dasymutilla occidentalis

Evaluate the drafted changes
This section was a really good addition to the article because it touches on a topic that isn't in the book yet. I would maybe take out the phrase "by previously states defence mechanism" because it is not a direct reference to anything and might be hard to for the reader to follow if they haven't read the full article. The parasitic role was a good addition showing how the ant interact with their environment. I would maybe bring up a specific example of what they commonly eat just to make the section more thorough. Otherwise this is a good section to add to the article.