User:Brynn.sare/sandbox

Topic 1 - Cresthead Flounder

a. The article on Wikipedia is very short and doesn't have a lot of detail or sources on it. There's a lot I could add and fix. It has details about the size and where it lives in the water. the source has a few more things on it that weren't added, that could've been added on there, so there's plenty to add.

b. There's a lot to add, along the lines of the anatomy, life line, origins, and more. I could also organize the intro, and go into paragraphs that relate to each other, instead of having two different topics in the same paragraph that aren't related.

c. When I decided to look at the talk page, there was nothing on it. I'm wondering, why has no one tried to edit this? Is it not important? Does no one care about Flounders?

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Topic 2 - Hawkfish Anthias

a. They sort of jammed a lot of information in one paragraph, and there's more to be said about that information. It's fairly small, not organized.

b. They added things about the color of its body, how big it gets, and a few things about habitat, but there's more to be added. Organization is key and it would be nice to organize it.

c. There isn't anything on the talk page. Has no one gotten to this one? Why is there only one editor?

d. http://www.fishbase.org/Summary/SpeciesSummary.php?ID=10771&AT=Hanagonbe, https://saltwater.aqua-fish.net/?hawkfish-anthias , https://reefapp.net/en/lex/details/serranocirrhitus-latus