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Article Evaluation:
Military history of the Neo-Assyrian Empire

There are some grammatical errors, very minor, in the beginning of the article. When I was reading through the background section of the article I saw that someone had noted that clarification was needed. I was checking some of the sources that were listed and the one link didn't work. There was an error message that popped up. Reading the article was fairly easy, but I feel it needs to be updated with some more sources, and re-evaluated as to whether the sources currently listed are still accurate and accessible. The way that the article is set up, it goes in depth about the Neo-Assyrians and their military drive, which is something we've touched on in class, but I feel as though we didn't really go as in-depth as this article takes it, the details and relevant and informative, but not biased.

Article Addition
The first Camel to be domesticated was called the Dromedary. This Camel had only one hump. <-- I added this as well as the citation for this to the article, "Military history of the Neo-Assyrian Empire.