User:Brynnbrodie/Me Too movement/Agribaudo Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Brynnbrodie


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Me Too movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * n/a

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?

Yes the majority of the sources are within the past 5 years since the hastag Me Too movement gained popularity in 2017.

Content

Is the content added relevant to the topic?

Yes

Is the content added up-to-date?

Tone and Balance

Is the content added neutral?

Overall, the content is very neutral by not adding any "I" or any opinion based statements.

Sources and References

Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?

Organization

Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?

- "In response to criticism in the media, the authors defended themselves by saying they were only trying to warn their friends, had confirmed every case, and several victims from the list were poor students who had already been punished or ignored when trying to come forward."

Reword to "In response to criticism in the media, the authors defended themselves by stating their intentions were only to warn fellow peers. Considering the victims from the list were from a lower socioeconomic status and when came forward were turned away or worse, punished."

~ Lexy